Sea Sparks

I’d love to hear some feedback on processing - The image was taken while the sun was still a way from setting so the particularly high dynamic range in the scene required a pretty heavy handed processing. The image is comprised of four frames shot in quick succession and blended in PS to bring the sky back and to create interest and flow in the foreground water (I’ve included two unprocessed frames below). I also blended in the beautifully illuminated ‘sparks’ of water splashing up.

16mm ISO 100, f11, 1/3
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16mm ISO 100, F11, 125


@michaelmcgeephotography

Man! I’d have to say this is an absolute wall-hanger, as is! I can’t get over the water “sparkles”.

Michael, great job of blending brackets for “wave action”, those sparks are fantastic. And the waves just below the rock on the right are pretty dynamic in their own right. I also love the color and and texture of the foreground rocks. Even though the wave action is very dynamic, I think this image is much stronger with the inclusion of the foreground rocks layer, it really anchors the scene.

On my monitor the top 1/3 of the image (sky and rocks, but not water) looks a little too bright to my eye. I think there is more detail that would be easily recoverable in the sky. The rocks at the top would benefit from more contrast in the shadows. Sort of related, I think the image would also benefit from adding a stronger vignette, it would help place more emphasis on all that great wave action. A few subtle tweaks like these would take a great image up another notch.

This one looks great and the processing spot on to my eye. Great job of blending the dynamic range and making it look completely natural. Excellent.

Michael,

Fantastic job on the blend and processing. I can see where Ed is going with his suggestions, but I’d call it tweaks as this is pretty darn excellent as presented.

Love the wave action and “sparkles” and I like that there’s enough rock at the bottom to anchor the scene.

Beautifully captured!

Lon

I agree with @Lon_Overacker, Michael. This is very well done. I really like the lower contrast on the rock on the left, it adds to the bright sky in the BG.

Michael, I like what you’ve done with this. My only suggestion is I think you could darken the sky for a little drama. Just my humble opinion.

Fantastic image Michael, and great job on the blend! My favorite part are those splashing drops, and I’d lean towards making them stand out a bit.

Rough idea of what I mean:

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